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  1. Congratulations on the publication on Friends and Enemies Joy! :goodjob::fireworks:

  2. Love, love, love. Brilliant writing and story. Wickham's exploding gun hair raising ending was spectacular and self induced - death by laudanum overdose to counteract the pain - his whole ending was priceless. Thank you for your stories.

  3. OMG! What a cliff hanger! You left us hanging at the precipice. We have bloody fingernails from trying not to slipping into oblivion. All the uninvited guests that are now at Darcy House, now the dastardly, deranged Wickham appears bent on total destruction. If only Aunt Catherine's cane whipped the arm the gun was in, dropped it to the ground, firing at the floor. Nobody but Wickham deserves to die - not even Lady Catherine. 

  4. Applause for Georgiana and Lydia. Caroline certainly deserved the set down and Georgiana did a remarkable rendition of Lady Catherine, but Miss Lydia wins the prize for putting her parents in their place. Both Mr. a and Mrs. Bennet needed a face slap. Given by her most precious daughter: priceless. Hopefully, flight of foot, dastardly Wickham will get his comeuppance in the next chapter. His days are hopefully numbered. Loved opening my email to find another chapter today! 😀

  5. Applause for Georgiana and Lydia. Caroline certainly deserved the set down and Georgiana did a remarkable rendition of Lady Catherine, but Miss Lydia wins the prize for putting her parents in their place. Both Mr. a and Mrs. Bennet needed a face slap. Given by her most precious daughter: priceless. Hopefully, flight of foot, dastardly Wickham will get his comeuppance in the next chapter. His days are hopefully numbered. Loved opening my email to find another chapter today! 😀

  6. Getting him in a vice grip is good. He will eventually crack and do something even dumber than he's been doing. Need to do a door to door surveillance. Probably within a couple of houses. Take him down London. Good philosophy in dealing with Wickham: Shoot to kill, ask questions later. 

  7. This is such a good story. Am anxious to see how you hang Wickham with his own perfidy. Beginning to envision the knotted rope around his neck drawn tighter than a cravat! Caroline needs to be set down to permanently remove her from any decent society. Maybe strangled by a cravat! Then, there is Lady Catherine: maybe her brother will finally shut her up. The three evils of Darcy's world. May they RIP. Death is the only solution for all three or transportation to Australia on a leaking ship out of sight of land. Love the newspaper article and cartoon. Wickham's treachery is now exposed and hopefully he is caught quickly. Also, hopefully Lady Catherine doesn't know about Georgiana. I can see Wickham's plan of treachery in exposing her to Darcy's wicked aunt and using it as a blackmail attempt. Lord Matlock better be behind his niece and nephew. Cannot wait for your next chapters. 

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      Jdawnking

      Thank you so much for your comment. What I will reveal is that all three will get what is coming to them in a very Fitzwilliam Darcy manner. Hugs! I need to type.

  8. Hopefully Wickham's last days of freedom and life are coming to an end. May the hounds of HELL pursue him to his end.  No loss to society, even the lowest and uneducated person has more value than George Wickham. Darcy's reaction to Wickham's spending his money by forgery was brilliant.  Love Darcy's complementary remarks about Mr and Mrs Bennet in relation to Elizabeth's life. She birthed Elizabeth, her only usefulness in Elizabeth's life. Another useless being in most Pride and Prejudice Variations. 

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      Jdawnking

      Yep! You got it, (Snicker!)

  9. Changed my mind since chapter 23. Knee in nuts wouldn't be enough to stop Wickham. Castration, leading to bleeding to death, an option, but by far the best course of action is instant death by any means available. How Darcy has let this SOB live for so long is amazing. Of course, then there wouldn't be this nail bitting story. Drawn and quartered would be fitting, but a fifth horse attached to his nuts would be sent off well before the other four. Ah, yes, ultimate pain before life ending pain! You can surmise, I hate Wickham, and you've written him very evil indeed. 

  10. This is so good. Wickham needs to die! He's a threat to everyone related to Darcy. Yeah for Lydia for sharing needful information. Heel on top of his instep, knuckles at his Adam's apple, she should have made it a trifecta - hardy knee kick in groin. 

  11. This gets better and better. The fact that Darcy is finally taking his responsibility for Wickham's ability to continue his behaviors, is a step he has needed to take for a really long time. His inability to face his father with Wickham's treachery so blatantly obvious to the rest of the world that knew Wickham, shows Elizabeth is right in her admonishment of him being like her father. Georgiana would not be where she is right now had Wickham been handled years ago. But then, there would be no longer an excellent story to read and eventually buy!:rainbow:

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      Jdawnking

      cperrin,

       

      Thank you so much for your comment. You are 100% correct in all of this. (At least in my opinion) It bothered me from the start how much accountability Darcy would have for aiding and abetting a criminal by allowing him to continue on his course with no attempts to check him. I'm so pleased you are enjoying the story. This one is very intense for me and I find myself worn out each time I sit down to type. 

       

      Hugs to you!

       

      Joy

  12. Thank you for sharing your delightful stories! 

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      Jdawnking

      How kind of you to say so. I'm sorry I delayed my reply but we are on vacation with my grandchildren and I'm rarely online. Thanks again.